Short Poems
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Re: Short Poems
??Macca wrote:so many folk in this thread needin their hole
I'm sorry for posting so many lyrics/poems whatever. Just wanted to share with you and know what people think about it. I want to use them with my band but the other guys aren't that familiar with English. And I'm sure my English isn't perfect either.
I'm glad about every kind of helpful reviews.
The last one deals with some faith issues and probably some of you can't relate to it. Obviously, the first one is about life lessons and dealing with the past.
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Re: Short Poems
I'm only winding you up. It was more a shot at Josiah and zaz.
AllC392Was wrote:How is Macca funny?
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Re: Short Poems
I fill the wind in your hair
I get that funny feeling in thy underwear
sorry bout that...
I get that funny feeling in thy underwear
sorry bout that...
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Re: #harshtruths
Macca's hole gets blown up every Friday, deflated Sunday, and was found in a garbage can behind a 24 hour convenience store.Macca wrote:I'm only winding you up. It was more a shot at Josiah and zaz.
anguyen92 wrote:Oh well. Deal with it.
gbruin wrote:Go reread what zaz says
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Re: Short Poems
Lemme post a couple of short texts I wrote for my last band.
The earth's awake forever vainly waiting
For hugs of darness and the silence mean
The sunset burns, the sky's anticipating
The night that falls and brings enchanted dreams
And all who live lead lives gone wrong
They look and search for never-ending peace
As if an angel, singing lonely, silent song
With wings widespread and when he's down on knees
The earth's awake forever vainly waiting
For hugs of darness and the silence mean
The sunset burns, the sky's anticipating
The night that falls and brings enchanted dreams
And all who live lead lives gone wrong
They look and search for never-ending peace
As if an angel, singing lonely, silent song
With wings widespread and when he's down on knees
I saw lation
Heineken Music Hall, Amsterdam, 3 November 2013
Helsingin Jäähalli, Helsinki, 14 November 2019
Helsingin Jäähalli, Helsinki, 14 November 2019
Re: Short Poems
That was good, GazEd
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Re: Short Poems
I feel you in the wind
you guide* me constantly
i never knew what it was to be alone no
because you were always there for me
you were always waiting
but now i come home and its not the same, no
smiling down on me, i close my eyes to see
and i know
you're a part of me
and it's your song
that sets me free, i sing it while
i feel i can't hold on
i sing tonight
cus it comforts me
you guide* me constantly
i never knew what it was to be alone no
because you were always there for me
you were always waiting
but now i come home and its not the same, no
smiling down on me, i close my eyes to see
and i know
you're a part of me
and it's your song
that sets me free, i sing it while
i feel i can't hold on
i sing tonight
cus it comforts me
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Re: Short Poems
Rerum Finis
Dont see death at cost of life
An all but end this shallow knife
To firmly grasp the world you hold
Is to protect what fools as gold
Look ahead, yet not to dark
Lest you overlook the spark
And when time comes to take away
Be sure you've left enough to stay
Dont see death at cost of life
An all but end this shallow knife
To firmly grasp the world you hold
Is to protect what fools as gold
Look ahead, yet not to dark
Lest you overlook the spark
And when time comes to take away
Be sure you've left enough to stay
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Re: BOOM ALL IMPROV-ED IN FIVE MINUTES
The Runner
One day I was running and decided not to stop
Until my legs gave and my body did drop.
The feeling reviving and the view divine
Until I realized I was just wasting time.
I was running to nowhere and getting there slow
Away from my problems yet letting them grow.
I stopped in my place and looked back from where I came,
Turned around and then started running to a new day.
One day I was running and decided not to stop
Until my legs gave and my body did drop.
The feeling reviving and the view divine
Until I realized I was just wasting time.
I was running to nowhere and getting there slow
Away from my problems yet letting them grow.
I stopped in my place and looked back from where I came,
Turned around and then started running to a new day.
anguyen92 wrote:Oh well. Deal with it.
gbruin wrote:Go reread what zaz says
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Re: Short Poems
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anguyen92 wrote:Oh well. Deal with it.
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Re: Some plagiarism may have been involved.
Sob Me a Lake
Shut off the bulbs just shut your eyes and let me know what you see
I'll wager it will not have a Diety damned thing related to me
This is most of what I've got
And I'll be darned to remain adjacent to you.
So go on and sob me a lake
Don't speak words that will be fake
You know you would
You usually shall.
Shut off the bulbs just shut your eyes and let me know what you see
I'll wager it will not have a Diety damned thing related to me
This is most of what I've got
And I'll be darned to remain adjacent to you.
So go on and sob me a lake
Don't speak words that will be fake
You know you would
You usually shall.
anguyen92 wrote:Oh well. Deal with it.
gbruin wrote:Go reread what zaz says
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Re: Short Poems
"I'll wager it will not have a diety damned thing related to me"
Post your poems from the mafia thread!
Post your poems from the mafia thread!
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Re: More entertaining at least.
These are actually better than the original ones from Josiah..
anguyen92 wrote:Oh well. Deal with it.
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Re: Not above creating a second randomness thread again
Nah. Those are works of art that need to be kept in their location for the full contextual feel.Lotha wrote:"I'll wager it will not have a diety damned thing related to me"
Post your poems from the mafia thread!
But if it gets real close to me reaching 10,000 posts on the 1,000th page of the randomness thread, I might have to do that. :Lol
anguyen92 wrote:Oh well. Deal with it.
gbruin wrote:Go reread what zaz says
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Re: 9,000 *kazoo*
I would like to use my 9000th post to write a short poem. The title of the poem is highlighted below.
Summer
There once was a girl named Summer,
Her truck, it roared like a Hummer.
She came to DQ,
There was a party! *kazoo*
When she left it was totally bummer.
Summer
There once was a girl named Summer,
Her truck, it roared like a Hummer.
She came to DQ,
There was a party! *kazoo*
When she left it was totally bummer.
anguyen92 wrote:Oh well. Deal with it.